阴囊长肉疙瘩:2009年高考英语试题分类汇编——短文改错（全解析）

　一、（2009.全国卷I）短文改错

　After five years away in my hometown, I find that             76. ________________

　The neighborhood which I used to living in has changed     77.________________

　a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop      78 ._______________

　across the street from our middle school were gone.        79.________________

　There exist now a park that has a small river running      80.________________

　through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and  81. _______________

　Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports  82. ______________

　center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of 83. _____________

　Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to       84. ________________

　a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle     85. _______________

　school is still there.

　【解析】

　76. 【答案】in→from。句意是我离开家乡五年，away from属于固定搭配。

　77. 【答案】 living → live。used to 后跟动词原形，表示“过去常常做某事请”。

　78. 【答案】older → old。句中没有比较的意思。

　79. 【答案】were → are。 根据上文可知饭店和鱼店消失都陈述的是现在的情况。

　80. 【答案】exist → exists。 主语a park是单数第三人称。

　81. 【答案】正确

　82. 【答案】sports前加a。 sports center是可数名词单数，表示不确定。

　83. 【答案】their → its。 前文中提到了名词The factory是单数，因此把their改为its。

　84. 【答案】去掉been。短语give way to“让路”，用主动语态。

　85. 【答案】Besides → But。前后表示转折关系。

二、（2009.全国卷II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1. 5分，满分15分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如有错误（每行只有一个错误），如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线（﹨）划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前（后）词。

　　此行错一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不用改。

　　Hi, Susan.

　　I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your                              76 bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it                                 77

back to you before four in the afternoon，and I                           78

was hold up on my way back. Just before I                               79

turned corner of park street. I happened to                               80

see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her                              81

mother needed help. So I helped them going to                            82

the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and                             83

a half hour and made sure that the girl was all                             84

hope you understand.                                                      85

Thank you!

　　Li Ling

　　【答案】76. 去掉to; 77. mean改为meant; 78. and改为but; 79. hold改为held; 80. turned the corner; 81.正确；82. going改为go; 83. here改为there; 84. hour改为hours; 85.were改为was

　　【解析】短文改错存在一定的迷惑度，但是相对而言，也是本卷中容易的部分。

三、（2009.四川卷） 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该加的

　　词。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该

　　加的词。

　　此行错一个词，在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　短文改错:

　　Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat      66.

　　with them. The first man got over his shock and politely said to        67.

　　The angel, “I’ve suffered by back pain for years. Can you help        68.

　　me?” The angel touched his back, and he had recovered.         69.

　　The second man pointed to his glass and asked if the angel          70.

　　could cure her poor eyesight. The angel touched his eyes,           71.

　　but he could see everything clearly.                            72.

　　The angel then turned to the third man, threw up his hands          73.

　　in fear. “Don’t touch me!” he cries. “I’m on disability pay!       74.

　　I don’t want to be a normally person!”                            75.

　　【答案】

　　Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat      66.   an

With them. The first man got over his shock and politely said to     67.   √

The angel, “I’ve suffered by back pain for years. Can you help    68.  from

Me?” The angel touched his back, and he had recovered.             69.   had

The second man pointed to his glass and asked if the angel         70. glasses

could cure her poor eyesight. The angel touched his eyes,           71.   his

but he could see everything clearly.                                72.   and

The angel then turned to the third man, ∧ threw up his hands       73.   who

In fear. “Don’t touch me!” he cries. “I’m on disability pay!  74.  cried

　I don’t want to be a normally person!”                        75. normal

四、 （2009.海南、宁夏卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

     删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

     注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

           2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mrs Winthorp,

　　So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.

　　I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one  second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.

　　Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this aftemoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.

　　Best,

　　Carol

   解析

【答案】what----how；句意如何让对方知道情况的进展，故改为how。

【答案】.anything----everything ；anything常用于否定疑问句中，不合适。

【答案】find----found ；现在和过去的对比，时态应为一般过去时。

【答案】second前加the  ；序数词second前的定冠词使用。

【答案】friend---friends； make a friend=make friends。

【答案】on----with； help sth,with sth.

【答案】warmly----warm ；由此处为形容词作表语。

【答案】去掉to，；had better do sth.固定用法。

【答案】mine----my ；形容词性的物主代词。

【答案】for----so ；因此，所以，应该是so, for表补充说明原因.。

五、（2009.陕西卷）短文改错（共10小题, 每小题1. 5分, 满分15分）

　　此题要求在答题卡上改正所给短文中的错误。请根据上下文对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）, 则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）, 在该行右边横线上写出应加的单词。

　　此行错一个词：在错词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的单词。

　　注意：原行没有错误的不要改。

　　My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital

　　With a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other 76.           

　　day when he let a bicycle ran right into him . He never 77.          

　　watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble.   78.            

But he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable.   79.            

room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read.   80.            

Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him  81.            

Lost of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time    82.            

From school because he is busy study what he has    83.           

　　Missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than   84.             

Expected and will b out of hospital a few weeks.    85.           

　　76.【答案】 breaking- broken.

　　【解析】非谓语动词做定语，与所修饰词是被动关系，用过去分词。

　　77. 【答案】ran- run.

　　【解析】let后常用省略to的不定式做宾语补足语。

　　78.【答案】 去掉trouble前的the。

　　【解析】get into trouble是固定短语，意思是：陷入麻烦中。

　　79. 【答案】√

　　80. 【答案】patiently- patient.

　　【解析】修饰名词nurses，用形容词。

　　81.【答案】 ∧they take him- and.

　　 【解析】前后文是并列关系，用并列连词and。

　　82.【答案】 book- books.

　　【解析】book前用lots of修饰，应用复数。

　　83. 【答案】study – studying。

　　【解析】be busy (in) doing sth：忙于做某事。

　　84. 【答案】fast- faster。

　　【解析】由than可知此处副词用比较级。

　　85.【答案】 ∧a few- in/within。

　　【解析】in a few weeks：过几周。

六、（2009.辽宁卷）  短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；

　　　　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　　　　　（试题内容见答题卡）

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money.  But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month  after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on  my own bicycle.

解析

【答案】friend---friends；Most of 决定了名词必须用复数形式。

【答案】it—one；it代替同一个，one指同类里边的一个，此处我希望我也能有一辆，与前面提到的是一类。

【答案】that---which；非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that.

【答案】the money前加for；、此处ask my father的目的应该是钱。ask my father与 the money之间需要加表目的的介词。

【答案】He----I；由前句he said he could only give me half of the money. 和后句的myself.可知此处应该改为I.

【答案】if---when；按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。

【答案】after---later；此处用副词，不能用连词。

【答案】gives---gave；按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。

【答案】去掉happy前的much.；此处how与happy之间不需要加任何词。

七、（2009.浙江卷）：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加.删除或修改某个单词。

　　k增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　例如：

　　It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　the              am

　　completely free then, so I’ll to \ say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8p.m. in Friday evening.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　on

　　One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.

　　【答案】

　　One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to 　a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella ks5u

because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted ks5u

the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man

might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without  expect  anything in return.

【答案】friend-friends  。---中的多数才能用one of ，one of 后用名词复数形式，改为friends.

【答案】besides----beside，在---旁边，用beside.

【答案】a----an；umbrella 的发音可知。

【答案】去掉in；believe vt.

【答案】is----was；过去发生,用过去时。

【答案】gratefull---gratefully；动词accept.用副词

【答案】and---but；前后构成转折，用but.

【答案】everyone---someone/somebody；表示其他人用someone/somebody else。

【答案】possible后加to；用 It is/was  possible to do sth.句型决定。

【答案】expect----expecting；介词后动名词形式。