优秀会计简历范文:如何提高英语书面表达的语言质量

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一、遣词的技巧

1.准确贴切

准确性是写作中一个不可忽视的重要方面,它直接或者间接地影响到信息的准确传输。如参加奥运会的“黑人”一词的选择,the blacks要比Negroes好的多,因为后者含有种族歧视的成分。

2.避免重复

同一类容的不同表述,会彰显出考生的雄厚的词汇储备和灵活的表达能力。如“喜欢”除了like以外,还可以用be fond ofbe crazy aboutbe keen on等。如:I like watching TV while she enjoys reading books.

3.选用高级词汇

使用一些高级词汇或者与众不同的结构会给阅卷老师留下良好的印象,且近年高考评分标准对此也有明显的倾向。如“掌握(英语)”,可以用learngraspmaster(English),若用command(English),效果就好的多。

4.选词独辟蹊径

俗话说:“话说三遍淡如水”,选词的独辟蹊径会给人们耳目一新的感觉。如“分秒必争”,用Every minute counts,就可能避开大多数人使用的important 或者make sure of (every minute)等。

5.巧“闪”妙传,迂回表达

当某个单词没有学或者遗忘的时候,切忌生硬翻译,可以将该词“闪”过,或者用其它的方式迂回表达。例如说:汤姆买了苹果、香蕉和菠萝去看望他的老师。菠萝一词你却不会表达,那么你可以把句子翻译成这样就可以了:Tom bought some apples,bananas and other fruit to see his teacher.

二、造句的技巧

句子是表达完整思维、尤其是组成书面表达的基本单位,其质量关乎文章的成败。以下几种方法可以帮助大家提高句子的质量、增强表现力。

1.合并法

(1)合并为简单句

a、利用非谓语形式

There were more than fifty proposals.They will be discussed at the conference.——》There were more than fifty proposals to be discussed at the conference.

b、利用介词短语

She appeared suddenly.Everybody was surprised.——》Everybody was surprised at her sudden appearance.

c、利用形容词状语

The lost boy returned home at last.He was safe and sound.——》The lost boy returned home at last,safe and sound。

d、利用同位语

Andrey is a mild-mannered woman.She married Thad.But Thad is aviolently-tempered man.——》

Andrey,a mild-mannered woman,married Thad,a aviolently-tempered man.

(2)合并为复合句

We live in the world.The world is in constant motion and in constant change.——》

The world in which we live is in constant motion  and in constant change.

(3)合并为并列句

Anna's husband forgot her birthday.Anna was very disappointed.——》

Anna was very disappointed,for her husband forgot her birthday.

Anna's husband forgot her birthday;thus ,she  was very disappointed.

注意:

英语中有部分副词(如besides,still, however,etc)可以引导句子,称为复杂并列句,这些副词后面一般用逗号隔开,前面的句子一般用分号隔开。

2.简化法

(1)利用非谓语形式

The doctor pronounced Rose better after he had felt her pulse.——》

Having felt her pulse,the doctor pronounced Rose better .

(2)利用介词短语

As soon as she heard the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.——》

At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.

(3)利用形容词状语

As she was hungry and cold,Carrie joined the streams of job seekers again.——》

 Hungry and cold,Carrie joined the streams of job seekers again.

(4).利用独立主格结构

If the weather permits,we will go to the park for a picnic tomorrow.

Weather permitting ,we will go to the park for a picnin tomorrow.

(5)利用名词、动名词短语

You can develop your mind if you often do some mathematics exercises——》

Doing some mathematics exercises constantly can develop your mind .

3.无灵主语法

即通过使用非人物或者无生命的主语获得新的有力句式。以英语为母语的作者更加注重客观存在的事物,因此他们常常会以表示这一类无灵主的事物的名词作主语,这种方法可以让语言生动简洁。如下面的两个句子:

It was dusk.A boy was crying in the street.

——》Dusk found a boy crying in the street.

I always studied very hard,for I had an ambition to be a doctor.——》

My ambition to be a doctor always urged me to studied very hard.

4.特殊句式法

英语中有许多表达特定语境中特定含义的固定句式,若能够合理应用,不仅能使句子简洁,更重要的是让文章显得非常地道。

如下面的两个句子:

He should speak to his parents like that.That surprised us most.——》

What surprised us most was that he should speak to his parents like that.

The bell rang and the students rushed out.——》

There went the bell and out rushed the students.

5.妙用标点符号

标点符号的作用同样不可忽视,其出现的时机、场合、与英语作文的提升有着密切的关系。如:

The students put the most time-93 minutes -into their homework ,and next in line is watching TV,which takes up 46 minutes.

"-"起到连接同位语的作用,可是对绝大多数考生来说这个出现在书面表达中的概率相当小。

三、行文连贯的技巧

所谓行文连贯,就是指通过使用过渡性词语来控制整个描述过程。同时我们必须明确:并非句子越长、句型越复杂,就能做到行文连贯,有很多代词、短语、句型都能很好的连接上下文。

1.运用关联词

(1)在同一个话题上补充内容:what is more,besides ,moreover ,in addition等。

The rent is reasonable ;moreover,the location is perfect.

(2)表示转折关系:but ,however ,yet ,on the contrary,in contrast,whereas等。

You weren't boring me.On the contrary,you're interesting me frightfully.

(3)表因果关系:since,as because,so,thus,therefore,as a result,so that等。

These birds are very rare and therefore protected by law.

(4)表条件关系:if,on condition that,as long as ,unless等。

I'll come on condition that John is invited,too.

(5)表时间关系:when ,while,as,after,until,as soon as,reently,since.等。

It's been years since I last saw him.

(6)表特定的顺序关系:above all,to begin with,firstly ,then,finally,last but not the least等。

Finally,I'll mention the advantages,then I'll talk about the disadvantages.

(7)进行举例说明:for instance,for example,like ,such us等。

A lot of us want to leave now-Bill,for example.

(8)对一个话题进行总结:to sum up,in short,all in all,in a word等。

In short,the film was the best I've ever seen.

2.运用非关联词:

运用代词、特殊标示词以及惯用的句型代替前面出现过的部分内容和句子,不仅会增加行文的连贯,而且还能让文章简洁流畅,更符合英语人的口味。

(1)运用代词:it,them,this ,that,one,so,ect

The old man says it will rain in the afternoon .If so,we will have to stay at home.

(2)运用特殊的提示词:do ,to, not

He asked me to buy him a book and I did so.

My sister said that Li hua has won the first place in the match.But I suppose not.

(3)运用惯用句型

Damon can dance but he cannot sing.So it is with Gary.It is the same with Gary.

Such was Albert Einstein,a man of achievements, deep thoughts,but with simple habits.

此句型用于描述人或事件的作文,作为结束语,对全文有很好的概括作用。

四、体现思想性的技巧

在写作的时候适当加一些情感因素,在准确流畅的表达要点的同时,适当增加句子的感情色彩和人情味,使文章读起来更好、更亲切的传达信息。

1.恰当使用程度词

程度词的使用,可以准确的体现作者的语气,和感情色彩。

如:Not only Huaihe River ,but also many other rivers have been polluted seriously.“seriously”这个词语的使用,使作者对污染的担忧跃然纸上。

2.巧用动词时态:

不同的时态会给人不同的心情体验。例如下面的例子可以说明,

I expect you to visit our school soon.(心情一般)

I am expecting you to visit our school soon!(心情急切)

I'm missing you very much.(此时的心情)

I have been missing you since we parted last year.(长时间的心情)

She is late for English class again.(厌烦情绪一般)

She is always late for English class.(语气特别厌烦)

3.活用语法结构

Never before could we easily find information with just a click.

Without the enternet,we would not have enjoyed our life so much.

4.注意体现感情色彩的特殊句式

How hard some students find it to tear themselves away from computer games.

书面表达的能力只有在一步一个脚印的情况下,脚踏实地,并不断的总结和练习,才能写好。

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