利好是什么意思:万能作文模板(内含曹其军、王若平之精华)

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第一段都是清一色的Describe(描绘图意),一般是3句描写加1句小结。
我当时的模板是:
(1)两张图
○1Upon carefully observation, we will find that the two pictures above are closely related in meaning. ○2In the upper one,_____。○3In the lower one, however,_____。○4The pictures convey a clear and strong message to us that_____。

(2)一张图
○1There has been a discussion recently about a picture in which _____。○2_____。○3_____。○4The pictures convey a clear and strong message to us that_____。

用以上两个模板对付所有的Describe要求的首段应该不成问题了。有模板撑着,只要在划横线的地方随便对图片做一些描写就OK了。
当然大家也可以找其他的句子。
用曹其军的话说就是背一些“扔出来能吓死人的句子”。

第二段的提问方式目前有两种:Interrept(点明旨意)和example(举例)。我们分别“对症下药”
(1) Interrept(点明旨意)型的:
○1The picture is based on the realities of society. ○2Just like the person in the picture, some people_____. ○3_____。○4_____。○5Such cases can be found in almost all walks of life.

(2) example(举例):
○1Since many of the philosophic principle we adhere to are adstracted from the daily life, it is easy to find that examples in the world around us. ○2The idea illustrated in this picture is no exception. ○3For example_____。○4_____。○5_____。○6In fact, everyone has surely seen similar evidence of this truth in the their own life.
一般有模板撑着,在空缺的地方补上一两句简单的话就可以了。

关键是第三段,大多数情况是Comment(评论),一般都是就事论事,很难找到通打一切的模板。
这就显出了曹其军的高明之处。
据我们曹爷分析,但凡评论或建议,抽象后就只够两个方面了:好的和不好的。
所以只要准备两个高度抽象的评论段落,就OK了。
好在我们曹爷已经为我们想好了。
请看:
(1)对于不好现象的评论:
Considering the current issue and worsening situation, we should call for some immediate action imposed by the authorities. In other words, our government of various levels must make relevant plans or rules to guarantee a proper order and justice. Beside, the general public should also be made aware that any prompt solution is of benefit to all. Therefore, it’s the duty of ordinary people to actively participate in the action.

(2)对于好现象的评论:
So far it’s not difficult to see that a positive attitude should be maintained here. For one thing, each one of us must be aware of its significance and possible beneficial effects. This way we can translate into proper action in daily life. For the other, some positive action should also be encouraged in the whole society.

把上面两段狂背下来。
这里要说的是,在第三段的提问中,Suggest(给建议)就等于Comment(评论),Implication(联系实际),就套第二段的example(举例)即可。
今天先写到这里,明天再说小作文模板。
向曹爷、平哥致敬!

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补充,第二段Interrept(点明旨意)中3、4句的写法:
这是需要你自己写的地方。
曹其军说:Interrept可以有三个方面:1example(举例)、2effect(说明影响)、3reason(说明原因)。
大家可以任选其中一个来写,一般是example(举例)比较好写,字数也容易上去。
但如果提纲有叫专门example(举例)段,那么Interrept中就在其他两个选一,以防内容重叠。