偶看新闻放羊鞭子自制图片:批改英语作文（1）-(2)
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(1) My class
My class is Class 4,Grade 5.（这里最好用：I am in Class 4, Grade 5)There are 48 students are(去掉are,一句话中只能用一个are) in our class. Our math teacher is Mr. Dai. He is tall and strong. Our Chinese teacher is Miss Zhang .She is very kind and strict. Miss Bao is our English teacher. She is pretty and funny. We study tighter and help each other.
Look! This is our classroom. It’s very beautiful. There are six lights and some pictures on the wall. There are some windows in(把in改成on) the wall. And there is a clean blackboard in the front of (用in front of)the classroom.
This is my class. Welcome to my class.
(2) A Beautiful place
Moon Lake Pack（park ）is a beautiful place in NingBo. that (改成it)is near my school.
In spring, the flowers are opening（开花用blossom.The flowers are in blossom,没学过blossom的时候，可以用另一个学过的句型表达，如：There are many flowers in the park. They are beautiful或者：The garden will look very beautiful when all the plants are in flower.）, the leaves are green, the lack（lake) is clean. A lot of birds are singing on the branch. Look, there are some boats in the lake.
In summer, （the)sun is hot .so many people do morning exercise in the morning. Someone are sleeping under the trees.
(in)Fall, the park is very fragrant. Because the sweet scented osmanthus are opening mow, fruits are ripeness.
Winter is so beautiful. The lake is grey and sliver .The park is quiet.
Moon lake Pack(park) is a very beautiful place. I like it.