新鲜鹿茸的吃法:应用文写作

【引用】2011年高考作文复习专题之作文应用文—日记专题
英语教学 2011-04-08 21:49:36 阅读70 评论0   字号：大中小
本文引用自刘老师《2011年高考作文复习专题之作文应用文—日记专题》
一．日记 ◆     日记：日记是用来叙述一天中发生的有意义事件的文体。
第一，  注意日记的格式：一般是左上角写当天的日期，右上角写当天的天气情况(cloudy/ clear/ windy/ rainy/ fine/ snowy…)。日期通常采用两种写法：一种是按“月、日、年”顺序；另一种是按“日、月、年”的顺序。注意要在年份之前有一个逗号，而且月份通常可用缩写词（如：Jan., Feb., Mar.等）。如果需要写星期，可将其写在日期的前面或后面。如：Monday, May15th, 2008或May15th, 2008, Monday
第二，  抓准日记的时态：日记记叙的时间通常是在当天的下午或晚上，因此所用的时态多为过去时态。但应灵活掌握，如果日记叙述天气、描写景色或为了描写生动，也可用现在时。
第三，  日记一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述，所以常需借助一些表示先后顺序的词语，如at first, then, later on, afterwards, finally, at last等。一定要注意句与句、段与段之间的连接和过渡，适当使用一些过渡词语使其连接紧凑、过渡自然。
第四，  确立日记的中心要点，尽量突出主题，可以通过对某个细节、某个侧面的描写来突出主题，千万不要写成一个流水帐。
★日记常用句子
（1）外出活动、欣赏美景
·I had a pleasant outing with some of my classmates today.今天我很高兴和我的同学一起出游。
·Early in the morning, we set off for the farm for a visit.今早我们动身前往农场参观。
·When we reached the farm, we were given a warm welcome.当我们到达农场的时候，我们受到了热烈的欢迎。
·They showed us around the farm(We were shown around the farm), where we saw many kinds of plants.他们带领我们参观了农场，在那里我们看到了各种各样的植物。
·We caught sight of a stream with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides.在小溪的两边，我们看到了绿草和漂亮的花。
·We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.(我们完全被大自然的奇妙和伟大折服了)
·Once on the top of the hill/The moment we got to the top of the hill, we were deeply struck/attracted by the beautiful scenery.我们一达到山顶就被眼前的美景深深地吸引了。
·How we enjoyed the beautiful views from the top!
·After being divided into groups, we set to work at once. 分组之后，我们马上开始工作了。
·Some of us were getting water, some (were) cutting the meat and vegetables, and others (were) sitting on the grass enjoying music. 我们中一些人打水，一些切肉和菜，还有一些坐在草地上听音乐。
·Three hours had passed before we knew it.
·The time passed quickly before we knew it.
·It was time for us to go back when the sun started to go down.当太阳下山的时候，我们也该回去了。
·At four o'clock in the afternoon we had to return / had to say goodbye to them..下午四点我们不得不和他们告别。
·On the way back, we were laughing and talking all the time. 在回来的路上，我们一路有说有笑。
·What a wonderful weekend we had!
·We enjoyed ourselves very much.
·Through these out-of class activities we can learn a lot of things that can't be learned in class.通过这些课外活动，我们学到了许多课堂上学不到的东西。
·Although we were tired, we felt very happy. I think it's our duty to cover our country with green.
（2）意外事故、天灾人祸
·I was walking along the street when a terrible accident happened in the street.
·One day something unpleasant happened.，一天，一件不愉快的事情发生了。
·The girl fell off her bike and was badly hurt.
·An elderly man was hit by a car while he was crossing the road .
·Fortunately, the injured people were sent to hospital without delay.
·The girl was too frightened to move.
·The accident delayed all the traffic for an hour and caused the damage of $80,000 这起事故导致了一个小时的交通堵塞和$80,000的经济损失。
·Lots of people lost their lives in the floods.
·The big floods, which occurred in 1998, caused great losses.发生在1998年的那次大洪水造成了巨大的损失
·A big fire broke out in an office building in a busy street. The cause of the fire has been unknown. 在一条繁忙的街道上的写字楼发生了大火。事故的原因还不知道。
·The fire lasted about two hours and was finally put out in the afternoon. 火灾持续了两个小时，下午才被扑灭。
·As a result, the three-storied building was destroyed, 50 people were killed, and more than 200 were injured.
·Up to the present, the cause of the accident is still unknown. 到目前，事故原因还未知。
（3）助人为乐、舍己救人
·Without thinking about her own safety, she rushed out and pulled him back.他不顾自己的安危，匆忙地跑过去把他来了回来。
·She told the teacher what had happened to her on the way to school.
·The blind man was out of danger, but she lost her life./ got injured. 那位老人脱离了危险，但她却失去了生命。
·He was praised for what he had done. 他的行为被表扬。
·They all thanked him for his help.
·We hurried to the policeman for help. 我们急忙寻求警察帮助。
·With the help of the policeman, we found the owner of the bag. 在警察的帮助下，我们找到了包包的主人。
·A clever idea came to his mind. 他写出了一个好的主意
·Then he put his idea into practice.
·I left the hospital without giving my name.
·This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life. 这可能就是一生中最难忘的一次经历。
·He felt happy because he had done a good deed.
·It was not until then that I really understood the meaning of the proverb:"Helping others is the source of happiness." 次到那时候我才真正理解那句谚语的含义：“予人玫瑰手有余香。”
·He will always be remembered as a hero.
课堂练习
今天在我们班的主题班会上，老师号召同学们向发生地震的玉树孤儿学校的同学们奉献爱心，希望大家给他们捐款捐物。你回家把自己不再需要的学习资料，衣服，其中有一套你妈妈刚给你买的运动服，和你本来打算用来买一个MP4的压岁钱带来了学校捐给了玉树的小朋友。虽然你不能买MP4了，但你却觉得这样做很值得。请你就这件事写一篇日记。
提示词orphan school 孤儿学校       压岁钱   lucky money
范文背诵
观察下面四幅画，以图中小女孩的第一人称，写一篇100词左右的日记。
要求：1.日记天气，日期，星期自拟
2. 日记必须包括图画所有内容。
Monday，May20,2010                                                         Fine
This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. She said, “Now in the countryside many children still can’t go to school because of poverty. Can you offer them assistance？”
After school, I went directly home. When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money. Though I wanted to buy a pocket recorded, I decided to sand my money to the children who are eager to go to school. So I began to write a letter to them at once. After finishing it, I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money, which will make a difference to some children.
I felt very happy today because I’ve done a food deed.
为了响应38年前毛主席提出的“向雷锋同志学习”的号召，配合北京迎“奥运”宣传活动，光明中学组织了一次到某车站的学雷锋活动。请根据下幅图画，用英语写一篇日记。
Tuesday, March 5,2002                                                     Fine
Thirty-eight years ago, the late Chairman Mao called on us to learn from Lei Feng. To mark the occasion, we organized an activity at a nearby bus station today.
At 8 o’clock in the morning, we arrived at the 712 bus station, where we were warmly welcomed by the drivers and conductors. Then we broke up into several groups. Some of us taught some drivers and conductors English, while others cleaned the buses. Still others directed traffic at the crossroads near the bus station and helped the elderly cross the street.
Staff members of the bus station and our classmates then took part in a general knowledge quiz on the Olympic Games in the afternoon, which was great fun for both sides. Around four o’clock, we said goodbye to one another, and left very happy on the way home.
Today’s activity has taught us the new meaning of the spirit of Lei Feng : Sharing with others what you have--- your time, energy, or knowledge--- makes you feel warm in your heart. It has truly made a difference in how I feel about myself.
作文专题——介绍性说明文
一．介绍性说明文的写作步骤：
第一段：开头对要说明的事物或事情简要介绍（点题）
第二段：主提按照题目提供的信息分层次，按照一定的顺序进行说明，注意语言的客观简明。
第三段：结尾照应开头（题目没有特殊要求，不要对此事物发表看法）
二．常用的词句
1. 表达时间
1）a long time ago,     2） at six o’clock in the morning,     3）at the end of,
4） at the weekend,     5）before he came here,       6） by the end of last term,
7）during the summer holidays,       8）in a few years’ time,      9）in the past,
10） in the old days,     11）in the past ten years,     12) in August 2002,
13) in winter vacation,    14) in weekdays,       15) last month,       16) next week,
17) on Sunday morning,      18)on October 1st
19) since early in the 20th century,     20)so far,      21)up to now,     22) not…until,     23)while ,               24)in the 1930’s ( in the thirties of the twentieth century)
25) January,  February,  March , April,  May,  June, July,  August, September, October,  November,  December
2. 表达地点
1）at the crossing,          2） at the end of the street,      3）at the airport, at the village,
4）at the foot of the mountain,    5）at the bottom,        6）at the top of,
7） be located in,                8） behind the park,               9）be situated in,
10）five kilometers to the north of Guangzhou,
11）in the south of Guangdong Province,             12）in the middle of the park,
13）in Class 3 Grade 2,             14）in front of the bus,          15） in the tree,
16）in Guangdong,                17） in China,
18）lies to the west of Sichuan,       19）on the other side of the street,
20）on both sides of the road,        21） on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean ,
22）on the right,.
3. 表达因果
as, as a result, because, because of, for,  in the end, cause,  result in, consequently, originate from, since,  so, therefore,  It is clear that… , It turns out to be… , The primary reason is … , etc.
4. 常用指路句子
1）．Go along the street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing沿着这条街往前走，在第二个十字路口向左拐。
2）．Cross the bridge/Go across the bridge.过桥
3）．Go on until you reach the end. 一直往前走，直到尽头。
4）. It’s about 100 meters along on the right. 它就在前面靠右大约１００米处。
5）. Go along the street until you come to the traffic lights. 沿这条路一直走到红绿灯那儿。
6）、 Turn right / left at the second crossing. (Take the second turning on the right / left.) 在第二个十字路口向右 / 左转弯。
7）、Take a number 46 bus, and get off at the square. 坐46路公共汽车，在广场下车。
8）、It's on the corner of Huaihai Street and Xizang Road. 在淮海路和西藏路的路口。
9）、 Go straight ahead along the bund and then turn left. 沿着外滩往前走，然后往走转弯。
10）. It's only about ten minutes' walk. (D) 那儿离这儿只有走大约10分钟的路。
My home is not far from here. It's only five minutes' walk. 我家离这儿不远，走5分钟就到。
It is one hour' ride from Shanghai to Suzhou. 从上海坐车到苏州有1小时的路程。
段落练习
1. 这所中学是20世纪60年代建立的。全校目前有21个班，121位老师和1，031名学生。学生每天上七节课，放学后还有一小时的体育活动时间。该校的足球队是全市的冠军。
2.我的家乡是一个小镇。它位于河北的西部，天津的南面。虽然它很小但很漂亮。以前它很穷，现在发生了很大的变化。这里盖了许多新的工厂，学校和医院。路旁的树木和鲜花使得它显得很美丽。
3.我们的教学楼是一栋四层的楼房。老师的办公室在一层。二、三、四层共有24个教室。每个教室中有50套桌椅，一台电视机和一台录像机等物品。每层楼的顶端还各有一个语音教室。
4.金鸡牌闹钟（Gold Cock Alarm Clock）特点： 1）记时准确；2）外形多样、美观；3）闹声清脆悦耳； 4）经久耐用；5）用户评价高、行销世界各地；6）质优价廉。
Possible version:
1．  This school was set up in the 1960s. At present there are 21 classes, 1,031 students and 121 teachers in the school. The students have seven lessons every day and they have an hour for sports after class in the afternoon.. This school is famous for its football team, which is the champion in the city.
2．  My hometown is a small one. It lies in the west of Hebei and to the south of Tianjin. Small as it is, it's very beautiful. It used to be very poor. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. A lot of new factories, schools and hospitals have been set up. There are many flowers and trees on the roadside, which makes my hometown. all the more beautiful.
3．  Our teaching building is a four-storeyed building.(Our teaching building is a building with four stories.) The teachers’ offices are on the first floor. There are 24 classrooms on the 2nd,3rd, and 4th floor. In each classroom there are 50 sets of chairs and desks. And each classroom is furnished with a TV set . At the end of each floor there is a language laboratory.
4．  The Gold Cock Alarm Clock has been warmly received by the people and is popular all over the world as its producer is equipped with(装备) the most advanced equipment and has a strict management. Being of high quality, the clock keeps good time and lasts a long time. It has various beautiful models. And the alarm is pleasant to hear. However, the price is reasonable.
课堂练习
信息，请根据以下内容给Jane回一封信，并表示欢迎她来参观。
学校名称 广东第三中学
地理位置 离大海约15公里的一个小镇上
学校历史 80多年历史的老学校
师生人数 老师200多人，学生3000多人，高中学段
校园环境 占地近15万平方米，学校很美，有花草，大树，三座教学大楼，6座宿舍楼
学习课程 中文、数学、科学、英语、计算机、体育、美术等
写作要求：
(1)必须包括以上全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经写好）；
(2)只能使用5个句子。介绍学校
假设你是李华，你的笔友Jane准备暑假来你校参观，想请你介绍一下学校情况。下面是你校的基本
参考词汇： 宿舍楼dormitory building
课后作业
你叫李明，你住友谊宾馆的英国朋友Mike明天想到你校（第一中学）参观。你提前到其住处告诉行走路线，但他不在，你便随手在一张纸上画上路线图，并在图下简短附言提示。请按图写一便条。
①友谊宾馆 ②十字路口 ③红绿灯④公园⑤银行⑥大约100米⑦第一中学
优秀范文
下面是光明中学的示意图。请根据示意图和图后的说明写一篇100词左右的短文，登到该中学的网页上。
示意图说明：
1.①～④篮球场（basketball court）；⑤餐厅；⑥学生宿舍（dormitory）；⑦教师宿舍；⑧和⑨花坛（flower bed）; 
2.所有大楼四周都种有灌木和花草；3.学校占地130亩。
Guangming High School is in the west of the city, with the Chengxi River running nearby. It covers an area of 130 mu. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and two large buildings on both sides— the library on your right and the teaching building on your left. Walking on further, you will find the gymnasium, which is the most beautiful building on the campus, with another round flower bed in front. Behind it, there lie four basketball courts. Next to the courts is the sports ground. Along its east side stand three buildings—the dining hall, and two dormitories for the students and teachers. All the buildings are surrounded by bushes and flowers.
仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。情景：假定你叫李红，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路。参考词汇：have a gathering party(聚会)
这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。
Dear Mrs Brown,
We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you?
Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite（在对面） it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate.
Yours,
Li Hong
作文专题之说明文---写人
★历年高考人物介绍试题：
1. （1991年高考）：上海出版一份“学生英文报”，对象是我国的学生。请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍，介绍少年体育明星孙淑伟。
2. （1996年高考）：你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。
3. （2002某省高考）：介绍韩国明星安在旭
4. （2006北京卷）：国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介
5. （2007年全国卷I）：假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：
1.年龄；   2.性别；    3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
★常用表达法
1.      性别与婚姻（Sex & Marriage）
I’m a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.
She got married in 1980 and now she has been married for more than 20 years.
I’ m 35 , male and unmarried.
2.年龄（Age）
He was born in 1995 and is eight years old now.
Born in 1985,he is now an 18-year-old student, studying in a university.
He began to make a living at the age of 14/at an early age.
By the age of 14, he had set up a chemistry lab of his own.
3.外貌特征（Appearance）
She is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long waving hair.
He is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.
He is a good-looking/funny-looking man, with a thick moustache but no hair left.
He is a tall man, with blue eyes and blond hair.
deep-set eyes ,big bright eyes, long straight nose, brown curling hair, broad shoulders,
4.身高（Height）
He is 1.76 meters tall./ in height.
The boy is not tall enough to reach the apple overhead.
He is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.
5.健康状况（Health）
Well looked after, the children look healthy.
I’m not so strong, but (I’m) in good health.
Having been in hospital for six months, now she looks very weak.
6.教育状况（Education）
I started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.
I went to study in Beijing University in 1984 and 4 years later I graduated (from that university).
We learned many courses, including……
I’ve been studying in Tianshan Primary School (No.1 High School, Fudan University) for more than two years and will graduate next semester.
I got my bachelor’s (master’s, doctor’s) degree in mathematics in April 1998...
7.特长爱好（Specialty & Hobbies）
I’m good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
I won the first prize in the English speech contest at school last year.
He got the first place in the homepage designing contest.
My favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis.
In my spare time, I like reading and enjoying traveling.
★翻译练习
1． 刘铭，1968年出生在福建省北部的一个山城。毕业于北京大学物理系。在大学期间，他各科成绩优秀，尤其是计算机和英语。他写的论文曾在全国获奖。业余时间他喜欢踢足球。
Liu Min, (1) ___________________________________________________________, graduated from the Department of Physics of Beijing University. When he was in the university, (2) ______________________________________________________________. He even won the national prize because of his essay. In his spare time he liked to play football.
2．  汤姆出生在纽约。他家人口很多。今年18岁，身高1米80。他每天骑单车去上学。放学后他喜欢打篮球。他希望将来能到中国访问。
Tom was born in New York. There are many people in his family.(His family is a big one.) (3) ____________________________________________________________. Every day, (4) ____________________________________________________ .His hobby is playing basketball in his spare time. He hopes to have a chance to go to visit China one day.
3．  王老师是我的化学老师。他五十多岁了。身材瘦小，并带着一副眼镜。他知识丰富并擅长教学。他在课上总是鼓励我们提问题。他经常说：“熟能生巧”。他的课是如此生动，以至我们都爱学化学。虽然他对我们要求很严格，但我们都很尊敬和喜欢他。
Mr Wang is my chemistry teacher. He is in his fifties now. (5) ______________________ _____________________________. He has much knowledge and is good at teaching. He always encourages us to raise questions in his class. He often says, "Practice makes perfect." (6) ______________________________________________________________________. He is very strict with us, but we all respect and love him.
4．  李立被认为是我们班最好的学生之一。她一直很努力并总是乐于帮助那些在功课上有困难的同学。那是我们选她做班长的原因。她不但学习好，小提琴拉得也很好。还曾经在物理竞赛中获得一等奖。她的两篇作文已经在报纸上发表。她为我们树立了学习的好榜样。
Li li is regarded as one of the best students in our class. (7) _____________________ _________________________________________________________ . That’s why we made her monitor. She is not only good at her studies, but also she plays the violin very well. (8)______________________________________________________________. .Two of her compositions have been published in the newspaper. She sets a good example to us all
练习实践
1.       假如你是李华，在高一年级读书。现在申请参加一个国际交流项目，到澳大利亚去学习10个月。请根据表格内容提示写一篇短文，以使接待学校和家庭了解你的性格特点等情况。
年龄
16
兴趣广泛
喜欢上网，爱学习，最喜欢生物，参加班级和学校的各项活动
容易相处
喜欢与人交往
关注的事情
学习知识，丰富阅历，将来在澳大利亚上一所好大学
优秀范文
1. （06北京卷）国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名： 王珊                               性别：女
年龄： 16岁                             学校：北京阳光中学
其他： 爱好音乐，摄影；善于与人交流，乐于助人；热爱自然，热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的：  结交朋友，了解外国文化
注意：1. 词数不少于60。
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I’m Wang Shan, a girl of sixteen, presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. I’m also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Through my hobbies, I’ve made many friends. In fact, I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them. Believing we all need help from each other, I appreciate friends’ help, and I’m willing to help anyone in need.
I love life, Mother Nature as well as peace. I hate any form of violence.
I would like to join the Peace & Friendship Summer Camp since it would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures.
2.       以“居里夫人”为题写一篇她的平生介绍。应包括以下要点:
1). 出生在1867年，波兰。
2）. 1891年去巴黎大学学习，学习刻苦。
3）. 1895年与比埃尔.居里结婚，研究放射性物质。
4）. 两人发现了钚和镭，于1904年获得诺贝尔物理学奖。
5）. 1906年居里去世，她继续研究，1911年再度获得诺贝尔化学奖。
Madame Curie
Madame Curie is a French professor of physics. She was born in Poland in 1867. In 1891, she managed to go to study in Paris University. When she was studying in Paris, she lived a poor life, but she worked very hard. In 1895, she got married to Pierre Curie, also a physics professor, and then they worked together on the research into radioactive matter. After long and hard work, they discovered two kinds of radioactive matter--- Polonium and radium. In 1904, she together with her husband received a Nobel Prize for Physics. After Mr. Curie passed away in 1906, she went on with her research. She achieved a lot. And she obtained a second Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 1911.
作文复习专题之--- 图表说明文
一．图表说明文的常见类型
1.   以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来
2.   表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的柱状图
3. 表示数据变化的曲线图
4. 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图
二．图表作文的一般结构：建议用三段式作文
三．图表类说明文的写作结构：
第一段：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题, 即conclusion.
第二段：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注意层次。
第三段：归纳总结或发表评论
四．写作步骤：
1．审题（四确定）
1）确定类型
2）确定体裁
3). 确定主体时态
4). 确定主体人称
2. 列要点
3. 依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句.
4. 构篇章,扩句成文.
5. 检查润色
6. 书写
五．图标说明文常用词句。
1. 常用词汇：
table(表格, 项目表), chart(图表), graph(图表, 曲线图)，figure（数据）,rate (比列，比率)，make a survey about…(做关于…的调查) , describe， tell, show, represent, Obviously/Apparently（很明显地），rise，increase（增多，增加），climb，go up， fall，decline（下降），decrease（减少，减低），drop，go down, ….
2. 常用句型：
1).The rate of … is
2).There was a great /slight increase /rise in…
3).The main reason is that ….
4).The rate dropped slightly from 38%in… to 31% in…
5). By comparison with…, it decreased/increased/fell from…to…
6). From Chart 1, / According to Chart 2, /As is shown on Chart 1,
7）Besides/ What’s more/What’s worse.
8）In a word/In short/ Generally speaking /In summary/ As far as I am concerned.
3.单句训练：
1.       由表1，我们可以看出……
2.       最近的一项关于人们怎样度假的调查表明。
3.       总之，通过对1996年和2005年所有比率的对比，我们可以看出，现在人们越来越关注享受生活。
4.       1996年，12%的人选择到国外度假，但是到了2005年，这个比率翻了一翻。
5.       选择上大学的学生比率由2002年的56.5%上升到2005年的81.2%。
6. 这些变化有两方面的原因。
六．真题回放
(2007年广东)上周, 我们以 “谁是你的偶像” 为题, 在2600名学生的中进行了一次调查( survey). 以下是调查数据:
偶像(idol)
女生
男生
伟人
18%
18%
父母
25%
11%
影视明星
50%
14%
体育明星
6%
48%
没有偶像
1%
9%
根据以上数据, 写一篇短文, 包括以下内容;
1.       调查时间, 调查问题以及调查对象
2.       男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异;
3.       “父母” 在男女生偶像中的排序差异;
4.       男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同;
5.       你的偶像及理由
七．课后作业
1
星期一, 我们开了个班会讨论 “上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗?” 以下图表是讨论结果.
Percentage
根据以上图表数据, 写一篇短文, 包括以下内容;
1. 增长知识,提高素养(quality), 利于择业
2. 成功的路不只一条.
3. 学费(tuition)高,就业难.
4. 你的观点及原因
2
.根据所给图表,写一篇题为“电影与电视”的短文。短文须包括以下要求:
A. 电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势;
B. 电视观众人数越来越多 (原因: 方便、经济、选择范围);
C. 然而还是有人喜欢看电影 (原因: 气氛、娱乐)。
参考词汇:  decrease v. 下降     atmosphere n. 氛围      entertainment n. 娱乐
film goer /TV watcher  电影/电视观众
Number of People (in thousands)
(a): Number of TV watchers
(b): Number of film goers
八.优秀范文背诵
1.       下图是你们学校中学生每天各项活动的情况。请你根据此图用英语写一篇短文，介绍你校每天的生活。词数不少于120左右。
As is shown on Chart，we can know something about our school life .
We usually spend around eight hours on our studies every day. We have to more than eight periods of lessons per day. What’s more, much homework will have to be done daily by students. At the same time, the time for sports is less than one hour, which is just one class period. For the three meals， most of us have only about one hour. And we have 7 hours for sleep, which is obviously not adequate for（足够，适合） young students. We have very little leisure（空闲的）time--- about one hour each day. For other activities like reading newspapers, taking a walk, doing washing or going shopping, we have just one and a half hours in all.
The truth is that we are busy all day long.  We really hope we can have more free time of our own.
2.       下面的图表反映的是你校2002年与2005年学生健康状况的部分数据。请你用英语写一份报告，反映你校三年学生健康状况的变化情况，并提出两条相应的改进措施。
A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years.
The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005, which that of overweight students from 36% to 52.2%. Nearly 10% of students lack sleep because of more homework to do. Besides, over 15% of students become mentally (精神上,智力上)unhealthy.
To improve students’ health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile(同时; 其间) prevent them from being nearsighted. Proper(适当的) diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens（负担，重负）removed, students can then keep in normal mental health.
3.         假如你是李华。你将代表学校参加国际中学生论坛，就你城市的教育状况发表演讲。请根据以下两幅图表，介绍你市高中生的构成情况及毕业去向的选择，并针对两幅图表中的任何一个数据所反映的情况发表你自己的看法。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m greatly honoured to speak here on behalf of my school. I’m going to talk about the high school education of my city.
From chart1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. There are even 1 percent foreign students.
According to chart 2, the students’ choices after graduation have presented a wider variety. Sixty percent of them intend to go to universities. Thirty percent choose to enter vocational schools, and the rest ten percent plan to go to abroad for further studies.
I think, with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up business here and they are happy to send their children to local school to learn more about China and Chinese culture.
I believe the future of the education in our city is promising(有希望的, 有前途的). That’s all. Thank all.
2011年书面表达模板
1. 正反观点模板
Nowadays, _____ is playing a more and more important role in people’s daily life. However, people’s opinions are still divided on this point.
Those who are in favor of ______ think that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, _______. Secondly, ______. Finally, ______.
Those who are opposed to ______ hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place, ______. In the second place, ______. Finally, ______.
All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh [ ] 超过the cons. The past twenty years saw the fast development of ______ along with ______. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of ______.
参考范文                (这个范文太长了，卡片上放不下的)
Nowadays, the Internet is playing a more and more important role in people’s daily life. However, people’s opinions are still divided on this point.
Those who are in favor of the Internet think that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, information searching is no longer a tough job with help of all kinds of search engines. Secondly, we can keep in touch with friends or business parters via e-mails or software. Finally, we can take part in groups to talk with friends of the same interest.
Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place, the Internet costs time, money and energy, especially for those with less self-control. In the second place, surfing on the Internet for a long time harms the eyes a lot. Finally, more and more young people are addicted to online game and Internet chat, which are harmful to their future development.
All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons. The past twenty years saw the fast development of the Internet along with national economy. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet.
2. 写求职信模板      （前边还用写上称呼不？）
I’m writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of ______.
My name is _____, a boy of 20. I’m healthy and _____ metres tall. I graduated from ______ and once worked as a _____ in a company for ___ years. I can ______. What’s more, I’m good at ______.
If all this satisfies you, please write to me. My e-mail address is _____.
If I’m employed, I will work hard and try my best to do everything well.
Best wishes.
Yours
______
参考范文
I’m writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of a secretary of the English language.
My name is Li Hua, a boy of 20. I’m healthy and 1.76 metres tall. I graduated from a senior middle school and once worked as a secretary in a company for 2 years. I can operate computers and type 40 words in a minutes. What’s more, I’m good at speaking and writing English and once won the first prize in an English contest in a middle school. Also, I’m a good car driver.
If all this satisfies you, please write to me. My e-mail address islihuawijamjb@sina.com.
If I’m employed, I will work hard and try my best to do everything well.
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
3. 介绍人物作文模板
_____, who is now ____ metres tall and ____ kg in weight, was born in _____ on _____. It’s said that he likes ____ most and his favourite color is ____. The man he respects most is _____ and the one he believes in most is himself.
He _____ and became a member of ____. ____ years later, he ____ (按时间顺序介绍经历。要用到later, two years later, in the same year 等词汇。)
参考范文
Yao Ming, who is now 2.26 metres tall and 134 kg in weight, was born in Shanghai on September 12,1980. It’s said that he likes meat most and his favourite color is blue. The man he respects most is Premier Zhou Enlai and the one he believes in most is himself.
He joined Shanghai basketball team in 1997 and became a member of China national team in 1998. Two years later, he was selected as member of Asian All-Star Basketball Team.In 2002,Shanghai won the champion of CBA and he became the most important players in the team. In the same year, he went to the US and became Number One in the NBA draft, which helped him join Houston Rockets. After many matches he feels a little tired now. Up to now, he still hasn’t definite plan.
4. 口头通知模板
Ladies and gentleman (或Boys and girls), may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. (或I have a piece of good news to tell you.)
a. A meeting (或lecture) is to be held in Room 203 at two o’clock.
b. There is going to be an English speaking competition in the lecture room at 3:00 on Dec. 5th, 2006.
c. The sports meet to be held tomorrow is put off because of the bad weather.
d. All teachers and students will be required to____.
e. Please take a pen and a notebook with you and be there on time.
f. After the meeting we’ll have a discussion in groups in our own classroom.
g. Don’t forget the time and address. (Be sure not to be late.) Please be present on time.
h. I’m sure you will have a lot of fun (have a good time).
i. That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
参考范文
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
The Students’Union is going to organize a summer camp. Those who want to join in it please sigh your names in the office of the Students Union. You should hand in 100 yuan. If there is some money left, it will be given back to you. You will be divided into three groups and you should know which group you’d like to join. The first group will go to visit the World Park. The second group will pay a visit to Peking University and Tsinghua University. The third group will visit the Great Wall. The camp will begin on July 10 and last two days.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
5. 一次难忘经历作文模板
Last Sunday, _____ and _____, who were the students in ______ school, went to ______ to help her clean the house. As soon as we arrived, we began to ______.
(描述事件的发生和发展)
A whole day passed before we knew it. we were very tired but very happy. In the late afternoon, we said goodbye to _____ and went back home.
On the way home, I thought a lot. In my mind, helping others is equal to helping ourselves, because only by doing so can we expect to get help from others when we are in trouble. If we are always ready to extend our helping hands, the word will certainly be a better place to live in.
参考范文
Last Sunday, Xiao Fang and I, who were the students in a middle school, went to Grandma Wang’s to help her clean the house. As soon as we arrived, we began to wipe the windows carefully with a cloth. After a while, however, I found that some windows were so high that they couldn’t reach them. Suddenly Xiao Ming had a good idea. We tied a piece of cloth to a stick and used it to clean the windows which were beyond their reach. After cleaning the windows, we cleaned every room carefully as well. A whole day passed before we knew it. we were very tired but very happy. In the late afternoon, we said goodbye to Grandma Wang and went back home.
On my way back home, I thought a lot. In my mind, helping others is equal to helping ourselves, because only by doing so can we expect to get help from others when we are in trouble. If we are always ready to extend our helping hands, the word will certainly be a better place to live in.
6. 描写地点类作文模板 (描写地点时可根据需要减少模板中的句子)
This is _____. In front of it there is _____ and behind it a _____. On its west lies _____ and on the east lies _____. Around ______ there are _____. _____ stands at a good place. After _____. When you enter the _____ through the front door, you can see a _____ first. Behind it is the _____. On the left of it is the _____, on the right is the ______, and behind it stand(s) _____. In the northwest is the _____  and in the northeast is the _____. Between the two buildings is the _____.
参考范文
This is our school. In front of it there is a river and behind it a wide street. On its west lies a park and on the east lies a lake. Around our school there are a lot of trees. Our school stands at a good place. After class or on Sundays you can go swimming in the river, fishing in the lake or for a walk in the park. If you want ot buy something you can go shopping through the back door to the street.
When you enter the school through the front door, you can see a garden first. Behind it is the office building. The teaching building is in the center. On the left of it is the playground, on the right is the auditorium(礼堂), and behind it stand the library and the lab building. In the northwest is the students’ dormitory building and in the northeast is the teachers’ building. Between the two buildings is the dining hall.
7. 谚语类作文模板
______ is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with. I fully agree with it and its implication. In my mind, it can be proved right in three respects(方面).
First, it takes time to finish a task— _______. Scond, ________. Third, looking at the matter from another opinion, we will find that ______.
Living in an age when ______. As_____, we should realize the importance of______.
参考范文
“Early bird catches the worm” is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with. I fully agree with it and its implication. In my mind, it can be proved right in three respects.
First, it takes time to finish a task — the earlier you begin, the more likely you will reach your goal earlier. Otherwise you can never be sure of your success. Second, when diligence becomes a habit, nothing will never feel bored and tired at doing social investigation if you really enjoy it. Third, looking at the matter from another opinion, we’ll find that social resources are always limited and opportunities are always for those prepared minds.
Living in an age when most people are intelligent, diligence seems more than necessary. As the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, we shoule realize the importance of early beginning.
8. 图表作文模板
From the chart we can see clearly that _____.
In my mind, the reasons why _____ are as follows. First, ______. Besides, ______.
The negative effects of _____ are also clear. To begin with, ______. second, ______, which are both bad ______.
On the whole, I should say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The key lies in whether we can make good use of it to increase the quality of work and study.
参考范文
From the chart we can see clearly that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased from less than two hours in 1990 to nearly four hours in 1995, and then to 20 hours in 2000.
In my mind, the reasons why coputers are more and more widely used are as follows. First, computers can help us finish many tasks, including both work and study. Besides, coputers are becoming cheaper and cheaper — many university students can afford it.
The negative effects of computers are also clear. To begin with, computers may be out of order from time to time, and repairing them can be expensive. Second, more and more students spend too much time playing games or chatting online, which are both bad habits.
On the whole, I should say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The key lies in whether we can make good use of it to increase the quality of work and study.